POSSESS ME..!!
Free me from the bounds of freedom, I want to be POSSESSED;
Engulfed in your arms, I want to be BLESSED.
Come close to me, hold my hand..And never let me go;
Let me feel your breadth, soak your warmth..Everything is still and time is running slow.
With you by my side, I have HEAVEN even in HELL;
Moon is shinning bright and sun is at its best swell.
BUT you left me in the midst of a nightmare..To rest in GRAVE;
I can't live without you, I love you..I am not that brave.
I'm sick of this PAIN...I'm tired of being high;
WRAP me in your arms..I'm letting my SOUL fly............
nice oneee
ReplyDeletehey dats really cool:)
ReplyDeleteshukriya:)
ReplyDeletei heartily appreciate it.
it's stupendous..Befitting title.This kind of rhyme scheme is my favorite but may be in future you might want to experiment with "ab" rhyme scheme...Keep coming up with more such poetry...
ReplyDeleteregards...
gr8.......nice one.........!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeletenice one sneha hav u set any music on iy can u sing it like a song on guitar or pianno ......?
ReplyDeleteNice one yar
ReplyDeleteIt's good did you write this?? (harshil)
ReplyDeletenysh job...sneha..:)
ReplyDeleteits relly gooooood
AWESOME SNEHA THTS REALLY
ReplyDeleteCOMMENDABLE
jst keep doin tht way
u wrote smthing tht worth worldclass apriciation
ReplyDeleteits super cali fragilastic expi ali docious
its wow di
m damn touched
i appriciate u frm the core of ma heart
a very deep thought sneha...
ReplyDeletehighly impressive, congratulations for creating such a master piece.
wow yaar u r great ,nice rhyme scheme
ReplyDeleteits good.....
ReplyDeleteVery nice. keep it up
ReplyDeletehm... that's really cool
ReplyDeletewell done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!cheers!
ReplyDeleteimpressed............u r a gud poet
ReplyDeletethank you for your feedback.I will try and work on every bit pointed out or suggested and i havnt worked this on guitar or ny other instrument.
ReplyDeletenooooo words sneha really i liked ds!!!
ReplyDeleteamazin work :)
good effort.....keep it up...
ReplyDeletereally emotional..loved it
ReplyDeletethumbs up gal....
ReplyDeletematte....gud.cul should i say...just follow the ryhmes n fly away
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