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| Repentance... |
Emotions scrutinized, heart trashed in the drain;
How could I free myself and feel no pain.
Caught up in the goofy air, scared by the murk;
My heart prayed to just get out, I need no perk.
Bruised and bleeding, but my soul was full of hope;
Challenged by challenge itself I drenched myself in dope.
Still walking on rough patch to see the light at the end of the
tunnel;
I plea to let it go, but my faith is thrashed till the kernel...
-Sneha Suyal
Awesome...
ReplyDeleteWay too serious.
Thank you so much.. :)
Deletegreat control over words n emotions !!!
ReplyDeleteShukriya... stay tuned for more... :)
Deletethis is one of your best works , well written u just amaze me.. i can always relate to your articles .. . GOD bless !! its really nice ... Daks
ReplyDeleteThanks bud.. u have been a constant support... :)
Deleteyour poetic verses play, have this power to inspire,
ReplyDeletethe emotions they convey, they create a desire,
every word having read, makes me only wonder,
why does one feel this way, make my mind ponder,
words come rushing in, like a tune to a composer,
i cannot explain it how, yet does that really matter ?
Thank you so much... The lines are beautiful and encouraging :)
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